Maan was startle seeing her tear stricken face , just then he felt his finger tips burning , he looked at to see white marks there, his eyes widen in shock and without wasting anymore time he rushed to take water bucket and flush all water on her waist area.he flush it removing that little amount of color .he left a huge breath of relief once finding it’s gone now.he was relive that color was not much and she react quickly.

Geet was startle and confuse with all happenings , she was so shock with his move but to her relief there was no burning sensation on her skin now. She tried to touch it but Maan hold her hand preventing her , he had washed his his hand as well , that was little color that it was easy for him to remove now.

Geet looked at him confused and her eyelids turn heavy , she blank out in his arms.

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Geet..he was worried , he took her in his arms without caring for his surrounding , and made his way towards her room from backyard.

Maids gasp to see the scene , they rushed behind to help there Queen.

Sulkshna who saw it rushed to inform Samrat first.


Here in the room , Maan was continuously trying to woke her up but she was still unconscious making him scare now.

He finally made a call to Samrat , so that he could called his known Doctor being the King here , he could make it fast.

He sat beside her staring her beautiful face , now had turn pale with all the happenings.

Who could do this ? He was thinking when Samrat and sulkshna rushed inside.

What happened ? Why is she unconscious ?

Samrat sat on the other side of the bed worried to see her state.

Someone had mixed chemical in color.

Maan’s words left everyone standing there shock to dead, loud gasps escape from maids mouth , few of them rushed to throw that color away so that others will be safe.

What ? Hows that possible ? Samrat was too shock , he was burning with fury.


Who dare to play with the life of His Queen.

He was more frustrated on himself that he couldn’t even took care of her , the fiasco happened in the palace of his.

Just then Doctor rushed inside along with her nurse.

Samrat stood to go , to look after the matter himself but doctors words stop him.

KING , I have warned you before as well took good care of her , it would be risky for both of them.

Her words made Maan dumbstruck,

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“Both of them ” ??

What she mean by that, his eyes widen in realization , he looked at the doctor as she continues while his eyes drag towards his Sweetheart , who laying still.

It’s good you flushed  water on her burn skin , but how could you be so reckless, doctor was fuming to see Geet in this condition after her lots of warning as well , that she almost forgot that she is speaking with the King.

Samrat stood feeling guilty, listening to her words while he knew her each words are really true, he could have look after it.

Sulkshna couldn’t took it , she blasted on her.

Beware, you are talking to the King.

I am sorry princess, but it’s my duty to look after patients needs, and here she is going to be mother soon and you guys can’t even look after her needs and safety properly.

Sulkshna just nodded her head understanding her pov.


Maan felt the earth beneath him shook hard, he felt his head spinning. He stood up with a startle gaping at her face , like seeing her first time.


Is she going to give birth to his baby.his own blood .? He couldn’t believed it .

All flashes from the time he came back here to her ,comes to his mind.

Her mood swings , her sudden anger, the way she used to cried on every small thing , blabbering him, her sudden change of attitude , it’s all because she is going to be mother of his child.

Sudden happiness rushed to him and he took one step to reach her but..he stop suddenly realizing she didn’t told him.he was himself unknown.

WHY ??

Samrat looked at his blank face , the way he stood up suddenly, his eyes were widen knowing there are no hide and seek now when he comes to know the big thing of his life.

Doctor was blabbering something about her condition and all about medicines but only sulkshna was listening to her taking all the needed information .

Both men stood lost in there own world.

Samrat was gaping at Maan gawking his blank face , trying to find out his reaction but there was nothing only his blank face.

He saw him suddenly rushing out without uttering even a word.

Samrat tried to called him but he was gone long ago , he left a huge breath thinking it’s needed to let him alone for a while and think on the situations which he is in. He had to comprehend the big news he just got now.

He turn his attention towards ladies now going near to them.

Take good care of her , King . Please.

Samrat shook his head understanding her.

Here is the medicines and her diet chart , plz look after her , she seems too much in stress recently , her bp had shoot up , and it’s not good sign for her when she is pregnant.she is looking fragile, her weight has so decrease, look at her , she is looking thin.its not good for her baby either.

Samrat felt a pang of pain in his heart, he looked at her pale face, how much he tried he couldn’t took care of her.


Doctor given her one antiseptic tube to applied on her skin , which sulkshna got from her.

Thanking her Samrat assured her , he will take care of her well.

Doctor took a leave before that she glance  painfully at her way.she was really worried for her innocent friend but couldn’t do much when she is the Queen here.

Take care of your child , God .she pray silently leaving from there.


Maan rushed madly outside taking out his car , he drive madly on the empty road of Jodhpur.


He was furious beyond his wits. Tears burn his eyes out of frustration , pain .

Each moments of them comes before his eyes , marking him more furious .

Her vomiting that day , her changes in body , her reactions to his questions.

How could she hide this big thing from him. He knew she was virgin. its him he is the father of a child.

Couldn’t she once believe him, he applied the break hard.

He hit the stirring hard furiously , yes she believed him, she did unconditionally , he was the one who broke it , broke her brutally.

He was the one , he hit the stirring again being mad on himself.

I don’t want to hide anything from you , just give me some time.

Her words rang in his brain.

She was not wrong Neither she is now. It’s was always him.

He fail to understand her, he fail to understand her unspoken words, he fail.

He fail to get the fact that he is going to be Daddy soon.


That word brought small smile on his face in between his tears.






He fail in every damn thing when it’s related to her , his sweetheart.

She was all along bearing it , and now even .he couldn’t took care of her well.

He made her cried, tense , scared all this while , she suffered because of him.

Doctors words rang inside his mind and suddenly he started his car to rush towards her.

He needs to be there , beside her , taking care of her and his baby.

He couldn’t loose more, he wanted to be a good husband , good father.

Yes he will married her soon now , would not wait more.


Precap :- Accident ??

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29 thoughts on “MEHBOOBA PART 65

  1. Awesome and so Fantastic Chapter

    Its great to see Sulksha also assisting now as she now knows that Geet
    and Maan love each other and it shows that she too must be a caring woman
    but who could have mixed chemicals in the colors so is after Geet and right now
    the only person that comes to my mind is Sheemiksha (Maan’s supposedly would be )

    Maan finally learns that Geet is pregnant and at first he was excited but remembered Geet kept it
    away from him but its great that Maan also realizes that Geet always trusted him and believed in him but it was always him that broke her now he remembers that her mood swings were always off
    but though she never told him she did say must give her time and she will tell him

    waiting now to see what Maan does next

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  2. Superb update again
    Who mixed chemical in colour ?
    What was his ot her motive ?
    Why they want ti hurt her ?
    So many questions in the mind.
    Poor geet .
    Feeling very bad for her.
    Its good that sulkshana and samrat taking care of her.
    Really samrat is very good friend of her.
    Finally maan knew that he is going to be father very soon.
    He is happy and sad too.
    He realise that beacause of him he hurt geet very much. Now he wanted to be a good caring husband and father.
    Precap is shocking.
    Update soon.
    Take care.

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  3. thanks for the pm!

    Part 65

    interesting update! Maan’s tension is understandable! glad Sulokshana told Samrat! did Sameeksha put the chemical in the color?

    finally Maan gets to know she is pregnant! he is stunned but also upset that Geet did not tell him!

    glad that he realised why she did not tell him! hope Geet tells him soon!

    great that he went back as Geet needs him!

    at least he wants to be a good husband and father!

    what will dadi say?

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  4. Awsm update
    Finally he knows about her pregnancy
    Loved the update
    His realization is indeed good
    Now nothing should happen to him,no major accident please,his sweetheart can’t take that pain also

    Waiting for next…
    I don’t get pm,can u send pm
    My IF username:NeenaDd

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  5. This was so painful to read. Before you updated this I was obsessing over how Maan might react and how it would have felt when he came to know of it, but this was way more real and painful to read. His realization, his regret, cannot imagine how he mist have felt when he gotta know out of nowhere that he’s gonna be a father and it is so sad and pitiful that he has landed himself in such a situation where she doesn’t even trust him with this news! What about the precap it looks so scary! I hope there is no diversion in this story with his accident or some memory loss n stuff, coz I’m very eager for a face to face of Maan and Geet now about this baby and its about time they spoke about it.
    This chapter made me feel like reading the story from beginning again and I have been stuck and blocked on IF and here big time! Pls give me a way out, I’m so desperate to read it but I’m unable to do so anywhere 😦

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    1. oh so sweet di
      thanks for wonderful words
      yeah its more painful and pitiful for him.
      about memory loss track , that everyone says , even i also know , i can take it but wait for further chapters, cant reveal more


      1. i don’t like memory loss thing, so don’t worry , about his wife ff also you have seen my different take over on memory loss of geet but actually i don’t like it .


  6. oh no maan ko kuch na ho………plz geet per thoda toh taras khao……..uski happiness k liye maan ko kuch nehi hona chahiye……………

    happy ki maan didnt mu geet…….abb shayad sab thik ho jaye…………

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  7. Superb update thanx for update.miss the if by the way am urs regular reder momiarti and my if id not opening and update just superb finally maan came to know the truth and feel hurt.but he relize his mistake and understood why geet not tell him about the baby.precap scary

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    1. Thank you di 🙂
      Yes me too missed old If and updating on it but now can’t update there because of lacking security there


  8. Lovely update, maan came for geets rescue and he finally came to know the truth about the baby. Hope now everything will be fine. But precap is accident i am really worried. Pray nothing major

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  9. Nice update..
    Maan came to know about truth..
    Maan was upset that geet didn’t told the news..
    He blamed himself ..
    Sulokshana told Samrat..
    did Sameeksha put the chemical in the colour..
    Scary teaser..
    Waiting for next update..

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  10. Hi! My id on India forums is ns.1 I have just started reading your stories and then India forums made some changes in their site which is showing lots of errors. Still trying to get used to the new format of the site and still links not connecting. Will try to soon read mehbooba and ashiq and leave my regular comments once the issue is solved on India forums or will leave my comments here only on your blog.

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    1. alright. thanks . you can leave your comment wherever you want. yes If is still troubling, new site is improving , so.


  11. Coming to update. Nice part thank god geet and her baby are safe and sound and the chemical didn’t leave its effect on geet. Finally maan learns the truth about geet’s pregnancy and is full of so many emotions that he leaves from there without saying anything which leaves samrat confused with his behavior. Though he is angry with geet for hiding the truth about him going to be a father soon, still realizes that it was his fault all the while and geet always wanted to tell him the truth. He decides to go back to geet and his baby and take care of her. But the precap is scary. Whose accident it is? Hope maan will be fine and there won’t be anymore misunderstandings between geet and maan. Please don’t separate them again. Eagerly waiting for the next part. Continue soon😃

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  12. An awesome update dearie…Finally Maan knows that he is going to be a father…The turmoil of emotions that he was going through…Hats off to you for emoting all of them so well dearie…At last he realizes the cause of her health issues, mood swings etc…He is so so so happy to embrace fatherhood and vows to take wonderful care of Geet and his baby:):):) Super excited me:):):)


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